A Poem by agreatpoetj06

Author: agreatpoetj06
Created: June 15, 2006 at 09:34 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Suspense | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 276 views

No Longer, My Love  

The love you had for me
Has vanish in thin air,
Like it has never meant anything,
But fate kept me whole from breaking down.

One night I slept,
And I dreamed that….
I have…..(sigh)
I dreamed that….(stop)(*thinking*)

It was all a blur,
Yeah, all the love
You said you had for me,
…..all a blur.

A dream, it was,
But though, felt so real,
It was nothing but a reality check,
For whom I thought you were,
I was all wrong.

By: Jonathan Celestin

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June 29, 2008
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I like this poem I have felt this way before. Your poem reminds me of something I have experienced.

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June 25, 2007
the theme poem to my life

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