A Poem by Profanisaurus

Author: Profanisaurus
Created: February 05, 2015 at 11:58 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 169 views

163. Would You Walk With Me?  

Would you walk with me through the park 
would you enjoy listening to 
the sound of birdsong 
coming from the bushes beside the path 

Would you hold my hand 
just to let the whole world know
that I'm your only boy 
and you're my only girl 

Would you enjoy the feel of the sun, 
shining on both our faces, 
as we walk through grassy fields 
enjoying each other's company

You know I would do these things for you 
and I hope you'd do the same for me 
let us treasure our moments together 
and look forward to when we can be forever 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

February 21, 2015
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The simplest joys that are given free by nature and hardly enjoyed now a days..I agree that the pleasure given by a walk with your loved one cannot be substituted by any expensive worldly things..loved the poem and thanks for sharing..

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February 07, 2015
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I thought this poem was very endearing and heart felt to read. Love the imagery of walking through the park, the sun shinning on the face and the grasses. I thought it was very beautifully written.

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February 06, 2015
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In character...
.. oh yes I would., as these are the things a girl/boy in love dream of doing.. A lovely piece, full of meaningful love. Thanks for sharing it!

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