A Poem by demon_love

Author: demon_love
Created: December 29, 2016 at 05:07 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Heartbreak | Romance | Sad
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 148 views

I don't Hate You  

I don't hate you 
even though I talk with sharp words 
and forked tongues 
lashing into you every time
you pass me by 
wither that damned perfect smile. 

You're kind with your words
and soft with your steps buy still
you drive a pain into my heart 
that causes me to lash out
claws extended, fangs sharp, 
aggressive in defense of my own heart. 

All because you left me 
empty and broken down
when I needed you, 
I know you had your reasons. 
you didn't know how bad it could hurt me 
and that's why I have to keep you away. 

I have to keep you away from my soul 
because you have broken it 
with soft silky hands and cashmere smiles 
softly killing me because I know 
I could never have anything so beautiful 
no matter how hard I try. 

I have never hated 
the beauty within you. 
Perfect grace and poise within 
compiled with the everlasting beauty 
that sines in your eyes. 
Who could hate you? 

© demon_love - all rights reserved

Author Notes

Written  November 22, 2014 (Still including it in my 2015 & 2016 Folder cause I'm a Rebel). 

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March 22, 2017
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Sounds to me like a couple who has been together for a very long time...and sometime they fight but they love each other very much and they can not stop loving because they are soo very attracted to one another!! Awesome!
(who is currently dead)

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