A Poem by michaelgallatin

Author: michaelgallatin
Created: March 16, 2017 at 03:45 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Weird | Animals | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 146 views

Yer-kalorting With Joan (For JoanDZombie2RC)  

One day I went yer-kalorting with my friend Joan.
Joan is a zombie but she's never alone.

Because Joan is as friendly as friendly can be.
She's a friend to the fish and also to me.

A cheese flavored cupcake is her favorite dish.
It was blessed by the wand as wielded by friendly fish.

The diamond wand of the winds is in their care.
And it blesses cupcakes but won't bless an éclair.

One day I yer-kalorted down that so bumpy road.
And I met up with fish but not one frog or a toad.

And the fish finally broke through that orb of hard ice.
They released the crown of magic light which was very nice.

Now Joan no longer shudders in wind or in snow.
She wears the crown of magic light proudly and...

now this you all know!

Michael "Wear That Crown Proudly Joan!" Gallatin

Last Modified: March 21, 2017 at 09:25 am
© michaelgallatin - all rights reserved

Author Notes

First time in a long time I've written a poem based upon someone else's poem. Must admit it was fun and I hope Joan and all of my readers enjoyed it.

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Comments & Reviews

March 20, 2017
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Im speechless!
You wrote this for me? I am putting this in the spot light!! even tho the word is
"yer-kalorting" it does really well I this poem!! its funny how things work cause I wasn't going to post this at all in the first place! an then someone made a poem out of my mistake!! wow! and it turned out even better! Thank you sooo much!!
(who is currently dead)

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