A Poem by Hansi


Author: Hansi
Created: March 18, 2017 at 06:21 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Lyrics | Dark | Tragedy
Upload Stats: 1 comments and 142 views

Unclad spirit

The heart evades deceives and lying
To the nights under the moon light

The snow, the rain, the storm, in the cold 

And the darkness is raising the hate

The love destroyed and died

To a hopeless day dream with no more dependence

Are there the things that I cared 

Inside my deceased ego, that no one takes on

 

Unclad spirit embraces the broken being

If this is a night, there's a morning mirage

Slink in the dark

Awaiting another day

The tears are falling down to the zeros

 

Twilight becomes crooning the secret lies

Standing alone at the lamp light behind the smile

Tonight is long and it is always alone

Till there's some one beside

 

The cry and sighs are vain, because of yesterday

That passes the miles away

At once I wander between the fantasy and sense

How do I finally find the soul?

 

Unclad spirit embraces the broken being

If this is a night, there's a morning mirage

Slink in the dark

Awaiting another day

The tears are falling down to the zeros


© Hansi - all rights reserved


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Profanisaurus
May 22, 2017
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Am a little puzzled as to why no one has bothered to comment on this one before me This interesting piece does have potential but there are a few spelling changes needed in my opinion. Other than that there are a couple of lines that I find myself agreeing with. Thanks for sharing


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