A Poem by Constance_

Author: Constance_
Created: March 20, 2017 at 07:20 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | Peace | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.9 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 146 views

In The Corner  

My bedroom is small but a lovely place,
    and in the corner I have peaceful things;
not expensive, simple,  often secondhand.
         A candle,
incense and a colorful rug, 
    some pillows to hug.

I bring with me some flowers in a vase,
    it is there that my thoughts fly on wings;
and I can soar to all realms grand.
        Oh, scandal,
meditation is like a drug;
    and I glide-  a lady bug   . . . 

© Constance_ - all rights reserved

Author Notes

Rhyme Verse . .  abcdee abcdee

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Comments & Reviews ( X 7)

May 07, 2017
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Hi Constance,
This is indeed a little gem from your pen. As long as you have the little things you need in your room, that is what makes it yours. I can see that you enjoy the simple things of life. I know meditation helps you in writing some of your gems. I wish i could meditate but even then i don't think i could write as you do Constance. An excellent little gem from your pen . Hugs....Mike. XX . This is an SL

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March 22, 2017
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Pretty and peaceful!
A person's home should be a place of peace, beauty and happiness. Very nice and a pleasure to read!


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March 21, 2017
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This poem made me feel like I was gliding!! I pictured in your room a giant hole that has all of your ideas spinning and going into your head...a place where you can also fly out of your room into a blue sky where there are cotton candy clouds (that have nothing to with anything sticky) if there is anything sticky just use the flying sinks with wings...you should write a story out of that I don't mind just give me credit
(who is currently dead)

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March 21, 2017
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A grand use of language to get your thought, full of pictures, across!

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March 20, 2017
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I don't quite regard it as being like a drug, but it is certainly a necessity.

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