A Prose by kitty

Author: kitty
Created: April 20, 2017 at 11:05 am
Upload Type: Prose, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Friendship | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 138 views

LOST ...  


Lost my way to your heart ...
Lost my 'vim' playing the part.

Lost the dreams I had in mind
All because life has been unkind.

You took my heart and tore it apart
Left me bleeding ~ ready to depart.

Skies seem dark today ~ I am searching
          for another way
To say 'Adieu' to have the final say.

Birds hang out in trees, sing sweet melody
Sunshine through the leaves ~ loves parody.

Give me a reason to stay >>>
Show me the way to keep heartache at bay.

Not out of pity ~ pray
for time will tell, the way seems clear ...
I face my final hell ~ 
but I am no longer lost.

Created @ 10.15AM Monday 20th June 2016

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

We don' realize how much 'friendships' impact on our lives.

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April 22, 2017
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You will never be lost
Lovely and sad piece all at the same time Kitty. I have always agreed with the old saying "You can choose your friends but you can't choose family" and I must say that during my life I have chosen some great friends of which you rate quite high in my list. Take care My Lovely. Rod.

Thank you so much for this visit Rod. Cheered me up no end! Think I've got a touch of the flu so its indoors so I wont spread my germs. Weather treating you kindly?

 kitty replied on April 22, 2017

April 20, 2017
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is magic and reminds us of what life is really all about.Friends come and go in our lives but some things like birdsong and the beauty of the seasons are constant..they never leave us , hurt us or make us cry.. SL

Means a lot this visit Stella. Thank you.

 kitty replied on April 20, 2017


 Stella replied on April 20, 2017

April 20, 2017
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When You do all Your best, reaching out to them, with opening hands and heart, opening ears to listen and understand, with the gentleness and kindness, with care and respect, not wanting to break into their privacy, but that You are concern, it's their choice to throw that away, I don't like to see You sad dear Kitty, but I also know writing is healing, pouring of emotions and thoughts, take care of You sweetest Kitty, Hugs***

One can only do one's best when there is a need to offer that shoulder to cry on.. without being intrusive eh!

 kitty replied on April 20, 2017

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