A Poem by JohnCreekmore

Author: JohnCreekmore
Created: May 15, 2017 at 10:28 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 53 views


Better a happy bootblack than
A bored king;

Better to find a humble niche early
And love it,

Than to dedicate a life to seeking
A crown,

Only to find it glitters not after a

We seek to fill a gaping hole with

To halt the progression of a too brief
Day with people and things,

While all along the Grail was hiding
In plain view before us,

And in our blindness we wrote it off
As nothing.

© JohnCreekmore - all rights reserved

Author Notes

Nothing that changes is fully real.

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May 16, 2017
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I agree here!
"All that glitters...". Beauty is in the heart of the 'ugliest soul'. Get to know the real person, not the'gold veneer! Have a good week all!

Thanks, Kitty.  Goals are good, unless they make us lose appreciation for that which we really have.

 JohnCreekmore replied on May 16, 2017

May 16, 2017
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A very moving piece on the error of seeking jewels when what we already have is a kings ransom in contrast.

It makes me think, precisely what poetry should do. Thank you.

Thanks.  You have grasped the essence of the poem, and that is  the main reason I write.

 JohnCreekmore replied on May 16, 2017

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