A Poem by JohnCreekmore


Author: JohnCreekmore
Created: October 18, 2017 at 09:58 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Spiritual | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 36 views

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I am thankful for
Being,

Not to it,

For it is not apart
From me.

It looks out through
Me,

Not down on me,

Which could only be
The act

Of another.


© JohnCreekmore - all rights reserved

Author Notes


I am That.

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Malpa
November 17, 2017
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Deep stuff
How have you achieved such depth of expression so succinctly? I really relate to both thought and style. Thank you John.
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(Author)
Thanks. Over the years I have come to value brevity of expression.  I believe you don't have to be wordy to make an impact.

 JohnCreekmore replied on November 17, 2017




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