A Poem by PoetGLG123


Author: PoetGLG123
Created: November 14, 2017 at 10:33 pm
Upload Type: Poem, A (18+)  
Category: Love | Dark | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 27 views

The Lost Sunset  

(The Lost Sunset)

Life- A walking soul,
Forlorn, trying to break
Natures mind.
Glass shatters,
What was once a reflection
Now is even more statuesque.

The air is filled with depravity
Trepidation for love.

The heart rivens and rivens!
Blood! Raining blood!
And that pain!
The pain we love and hate
Seems so execrable, gives us
a tiny sliver of optimism.


© PoetGLG123 - all rights reserved

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Caroline
November 18, 2017
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I love ypur piece
This is just lovely...lots of layers...it is quite unique...love to.read more of you...Caroline xx
applaud


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chrome
November 14, 2017
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AWESOME!!!!
what inspires you to write this beautiful poem?
the words are well put together, everything make sense
and ha a deeper meaning .
keep up the good work


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