A Poem by Marcas


Author: Marcas
Created: January 04, 2018 at 08:42 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.87 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 68 views

A real good thing  

Isn' it always good
On the walk away
To give your feelings a chance
To remember it's own way


© Marcas - all rights reserved


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michaelgallatin
January 07, 2018
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Believe you've taken...
a bit of flak of late. I refuse to get involved in petty squabbles. I already left a former site due to that idiocy. Nuff said Sir! I find in your short poems some rawness but also deeper meaning. This one I do like because of the suggestion I see to remain calm and under control even after loss. Being an honest and fair critic though; you want "Isn't" in Line One and Line Four would work better with "their own way" since "feelings" is plural.

Happy New Year My Friend,
Mike


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MayfordVC
January 06, 2018
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Organic
Enjoyed the deeper messaged within this poem.


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EdwinBozie
January 06, 2018
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Short but true
I can't say much about this poem because it is quite short but I do understand that the theme of this poem is to be true to oneself. In a certain way, the poem sounds like a question and at the same time a suggestion.


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kitty
January 05, 2018
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Worth a thought
Time always to stop and reflect on the way our words affect the writing community. Best of everything to you in 2018



(Author)
Kitty, happy new year to the most beautiful woman that ever walked a Brummy Street...peace 

 Marcas replied on January 05, 2018


You flatterer! May your ink flow gracefully over these pages. We nearly lost the site at one stage. Put across messages of  effectiveness and goodwill ... your ink is golden at this time in our lives. Blessings! Green is the grass in Ireland - speak of its beauty, my friend!

 kitty replied on January 05, 2018




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