A Poem by seriouspoet


Author: seriouspoet
Created: January 08, 2018 at 01:39 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 61 views

Jewlery box of my heart  

My darling Devine 
Before we met
The jewelery box of my heart
Was empty and locked
Due to calamity
But now you have the only key
You will never lose
And you filled this box
With magnificent pearls
Oh how they shine
Like the dreamy moon
That hovers above
As time stands stull


Last Modified: January 08, 2018 at 01:44 am
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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)



davolad
January 19, 2018
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Lovely
What a nice piece from a beautiful heart.Keep moving.
applaud


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EdwinBozie
January 09, 2018
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Beautiful love poem
This is a beautiful love poem. Enjoyed the imagery used. The poem seems to compare the persona's heart to a jewellery box. It appeared the persona had a traumatic experience in the past and due to that, the persona might have been very hesitant to display his feelings. However, the love interest in the poem appears to have filled the persona's life with beautiful experiences. It is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.


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kitty
January 09, 2018
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Precious are....
.. the jewels we store in our personal treasure chest: one we can open at random at anytime toe retrieve those secret troves! Well said here.
applaudapplaudapplaud


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JohnCreekmore
January 08, 2018
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Moving
This is a clearly worded, brief and very moving tribute. Well done, but you might do a spell check on "Devine."
applaudapplaud


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Marcas
January 08, 2018
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I've been on the liquor since you Shouted at me for writing my poetry stuff, haven't even shaved, I look like a caveman, goddamn Barney Rubble or sumfin, I hope your happy now


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