A Poem by kitty

Author: kitty
Created: January 20, 2018 at 02:25 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Romance | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 90 views


                            SAY WONDERFUL THINGS

Say wonderful things to me
I think you are wonderful too!
Memory of time spent ~ the memory of you.

The plans once made ~ will never fade.
For deep down there is that bond between us
                        right through the decade(s).

No hard feelings, no fuss ~ hold on to that you must!
Acknowledgements of the 'love' we once shared
For though tis only in thoughts and words we paired ...

The world was at our feet ~ dynamic duo ~ right up our street!

May our minds continue to mesh
Life could continue to be bright and fresh ...
as long as you continue to say >>>
     wonderful things to me!

Created  @ 6.45am on Saturday 20th January 2018

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

The world would be a better place if these words were thought over carefully, ' How pleasant it would be if humans could dwell together in harmony'.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

February 10, 2018
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Sweet sweet and soooo sweet dear Kitty, sweet like honey! like always Your words dance over Your page with such a wonderful positive energy! I always smile when I read You, and I always feel that ever young heart of Yours, that ever romantic spirit of Yours dance and dance and just keep on dancing beautifully to the romance and beauty in this world, oh! thank You*

Thank you my dear friend for such a charming review. Tryng to convey some of the vibes picked up on WN. Keeps me going as it is a welcome escape from the true realities of life. Have a gorgeous week end. My new found brother is being buried today. Keeping my spirits up as I can't attend his funeral. Be safe. Blessings.

 kitty replied on February 10, 2018

January 21, 2018
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Great piece Kitty, it seems that we are on the same path when it comes to human behaviour. Why cant couples dwell in harmony? the older we get the more we see the truth. Going away on Wednesday for three weeks so don't think that I have deserted you !! take care Rod.

Life is for living my dear friend .. .. enjoy it when you are able as U never know what tomorrow mingt bring. Hopefully the weather will treat you both kindly. Be inspired. C U when U get back!

 kitty replied on January 21, 2018

January 20, 2018
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And two more for a 15!!!
So very, very, very true and so well said! One of my best friends coined "PPU", prefect, precious and unique. The other constantly speaks of compassion toward others. My wife (we parted for some time awhile ago) is caring and tries hard to be understanding as well. My eldest son has a heart bigger than my tummy and that's damned big. Then good Lord, there's Lili, my sweet Putian! So a poem I really enjoyed and understood!


What charming words you utter my poetic friend! Thank you so much. Makes posting worthwhile, with reviews like this.

 kitty replied on January 20, 2018

January 20, 2018
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Kitty, this is absolutely beautiful! I love your work! I am a huge fan! Please keep it the amazing work. Your right, people should read and say more wonderful things!

Simple words from a humble writer. Thanks for appreciating them. Have a great week end!

 kitty replied on January 20, 2018

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