A Poem by blossomwriter


Author: blossomwriter
Created: February 10, 2018 at 01:07 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Spiritual | Dark
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 43 views

With Wings Of A Clipped Rose  

fallen wings of a clipped rose
solemn where to the darkness goes
closing in is this buried night
in this life it's so far so sight 

to be withered like a stone
restless dreams walk alone
struggle is the answer to death
numbing sheep lay lament to their slaughter

feeling so much closer to the edge
falling on bended knee to the tilting ledge
knowing desire is the struggle 
that feeds the fire to its burn

and knowing all we can do
is let live and then we learn
sorrows can fill a hole
deeper inside the aching soul

our hearts like a dying star
we were born into the blackness burrel
with truth and light 
to shine so much brighter then we've known
its those who have grown 
to super nova the massive entirety 
of their own vanquish

and now here I stand
with love and light truth and justice
to find in me another hole
with wings of a clipped rose
like a dying soul.








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babyboomer68
February 13, 2018
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Blossomwriter, once the rose is clipped from its bush, its life span is shortened. I enjoyed reading the poem with its clever use of simile and metaphor. ~ Sonia
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(Author)
Ty I appreciate your kind words and your time reading my poem 🖋

 blossomwriter replied on February 14, 2018


(Author)
Ty I appreciate your kind words and your time reading my poem 🖋

 blossomwriter replied on February 14, 2018




kitty
February 10, 2018
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Deep.Emotional piece
A tinge sad buts goes straight to the reader'. Empathic piece.
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(Author)
Thank you so much...🖋This means a lot.. 🌹

 blossomwriter replied on February 14, 2018




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