A Poem by EDP1996


Author: EDP1996
Created: February 13, 2018 at 01:38 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Religion | Spiritual | Personal
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 63 views

Brainwashed  

Flawless you appear, a wolf wrapped in wool
Put your hands down, honey
You look like a fool
Your church of false comfort
It's just a rich man's tool

But can't you see that you're wrong
You're naught but a cult
You've got blood on your hands
Bury your own sins in the dirt
Blind your eyes to the truth

God sees what you are
He knows your true form
From His truth you are far
When your mind is so closed
You are your enemy of war

You don't see as you judge me
That your own soul's a wreck
You tell me I'm wrong
But you can't keep your own life in check
Can't you see the brainwash?


Last Modified: February 13, 2018 at 10:39 pm
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babyboomer68
February 16, 2018
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EDP, those who are judgmental have a tendency to alienate people. Your poem reads as a vent against a sanctimonious individual. ~ Sonia


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