A Poem by kitty

Author: kitty
Created: March 04, 2018 at 03:52 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 36 views


                                CHANGES >>>

Changes in you, in me, in our society.
Climate changes that affect our economy.

Our future here on earth is insecure:
we ask for ~ we demand much more.

The going's getting tougher
life and living's getting rougher.

United in strength and rules overload
we seek cherries to top the cake after
we've iced it and covered the cracks
our governments made by ignoring the
signs of global warming that humans
            create - to date.

Green fields and pastures no more
water in floods will wash our door.

Snow drifts from far off lands >>>
bring turmiol and chaos on our hands.

Changes in mindset and accountability
make for disaster in all probability.

Created @ 10.15PM 2nd March 2018

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

Current climate changes and 'changes' in standards have prompted this piece. 

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March 06, 2018
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Yes there have been a huge amount of changes going on even recently both in this country and around the world. Unfortunately most of these changes appear to be just for the sake of change and don't actually carry any real benefit for most people. There is no unity in governments and this can only spell disaster as it may already be too late. Dark days are certainly here and it may only get darker as we carry on. Thanks for sharing

Thanks again "P" for your visit to my humble page. Concern is shown yet we continue to make our planet unsafe. If only each person could be responsible enough to do their bit!

 kitty replied on March 07, 2018

March 06, 2018
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Really enjoyed this one Kitty, I gather it was brought about by the weather of late. I have to agree, we are creating havoc with Nature and I guess we always have, it is now that we are too far down the "Destroying road" that there is no way back.(can you really see us managing to live without plastic?) Loved it all Kitty and to be honest I am so glad to be at this end of my life than the beginning! take care SL Rod.

Thanks Rod for your lovely and factual review. You are right about us being on the right side of the spectrum! So much is being done to raise awareness as to our contribution towards the 'destruction ' of our planet with the dreaded Plastic, but do the ignoramusses take heed?!

 kitty replied on March 06, 2018

March 05, 2018
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William daivd
wow amazing post i really like your poem, make me joyful

Thank you for this review William. Glad you liked it!

 kitty replied on March 05, 2018

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