A Poem by kitty

Author: kitty
Created: March 12, 2018 at 05:09 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Drama | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 38 views



Moments of passion ~ moments of joy
Going back to when he was a boy.

Passed from one to another >>>
but don't blame it on 'mother'.

She lost sight of what was right
with demons she put up a fight!

From a disfunctional family she came
innocent offspring should not take blame.

With direct guidance and foresight
he came top of the class ~ he was bright.

Equipped himself in all that could be understood
kept out of trouble - not a member of the 'hood'.

Flashbacks come flashbacks go >>>
some magnificient, others you do not want to know!

Years now spent ~ life now smooth ~ without dent.
Flashbacks of times of old  >>> .<<<
when mother and child were out in the cold.

Now wealth is in domain
still flashbacks still remain

Created @ 7.15pm Monday 12th March 2018

© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes

We all have events in life that keeps coming back in memory.

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March 14, 2018
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Sometimes memories of a darker past come forth at times to haunt us no matter how much we try to forget them. This boy seems to have made a good life despite his upbringing. Very inspirational.SL

Taken from lives of people in my past. Funny what can be gathered from experiences encountered in life! Thank you for a lovely review and the visit of course. Have a great day!

 kitty replied on March 14, 2018

March 12, 2018
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Flash backs are normally not helpful and some people have to put up with especially nasty ones. The ones mentioned do not seem to be as bad as some and in a way this character should be more than happy with that. In this case it is possible that he was able to use his as a way of pushing onto far greater things. In a way inspiring. Thanks for sharing

Thank you "P" for this kind review. 'We see life at times through a dark mirror, yet when we come face to face with our realities life can be worth living. Have a good day! 

 kitty replied on March 13, 2018

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