A Poem by Princesslove

Author: Princesslove
Created: March 13, 2018 at 09:10 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Romance
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 29 views

Heartbeats to heartbeats  

When you touch me

My heart beats

Lounder than any drum

Because it's all I was longing for

Just to feel you in every way

And as we exchange a beautiful kiss

On each other lips

Your soul and mine

Inhale endless love we share  together 

Such beauty between you and me

From heartbeats to heartbeats.

Last Modified: March 13, 2018 at 09:40 pm
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March 15, 2018
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This is beautiful. I love the title, and how it fits into the piece itself. There is such a feeling of love and completeness here, and I'm glad that these two people have found each other.

Thank you

 Princesslove replied on March 16, 2018

March 14, 2018
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There is beauty in this writing piece, as it shows the union between man & woman. Also known as, husband and wife. Your writing piece expresses love in the most perfect way; as when the calling of the heart is heard by the other, you know in the matter of truth, that forever had just been created. When the two of you were to share your wisdom in love upon another, the world was confused, as they could not see through your binoculars. Keep up the good work, and continue writing in the spirit of love. For love never fails.

Thank you

 Princesslove replied on March 14, 2018

March 13, 2018
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There is a gentle romance and honesty in these lines that causes a smile. There are times and people who make heart beater faster and seemingly louder with no rational explanation. I believe that you were meaning "My heart beats". It would be nice is such a piece could come true for you but it could be that it already has. Thanks for sharing

Thank you

 Princesslove replied on March 14, 2018

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