A Poem by elphie

Author: elphie
Created: July 13, 2007 at 07:12 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 264 views

Masking my feelings  

Sometimes we wonder why
We can't let ourselves cry
Bottle it all up inside
Try to hide
The emotions we have within
We mask it with a grin

© elphie - all rights reserved

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January 05, 2012
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The False Mask
Yes we all put up that false mask when we should be out having fun but we just can't.. nicely written


 elphie replied on January 06, 2012

December 18, 2010
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Very poetic
this is very poetic you really done well i am so impressed by your writing keep on writing Elphie you have got the skills and courage as a true legacy poet warrior your legacy will burn brightly just like mine. keep on going you will have a success here at writers-network To Elphie This poem is going to the spotlight

Thank you so very much for your kind words.

 elphie replied on December 18, 2010

July 14, 2007
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Very good! I know exactly what you talking about.

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