A Poem by blackblood6627


Author: blackblood6627
Created: June 02, 2008 at 04:53 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Nature | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 6 users with 8 comments and 347 views

nature is calling  

baby bunnies fish and deer
i never want to leave here
with all animals and plants
i never want to leave

the sun shines on my back
fresh air is what the city lacks
maple oak spruce and pine
oh how i wish this home were mine

hiking by day campfires by night
and oh what a wonderful sight
i see a beautiful butterfly flutter in the wind
the sun starts to set as the howling of wolves begin

the owl flies by and says hoo hoo
the birds in the nest softly go coo
life comes to a rest and all is calm
in the forest of life


© blackblood6627 - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



ScooterAnderson
April 23, 2009
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I like how you put this poem together.


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wordsunspoken
January 21, 2009
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awe inspiring
This poem made me feel as if I was back in the woods in my best friend's backyard, and pretending that the woods were my only home. Sorry for the life story, but you get the point: your poem was really good. Your imagery is on point, and I like your style of poetry.


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HPGreg
January 19, 2009
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Very nice
A very nice read, you gave this read life with your metaphors and imagery.
Good flow as well, keep up the good work.

HP Greg


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iluvthearts
January 19, 2009
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nice poem


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katiekatie888
January 12, 2009
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Great Job


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kyrab_mtions
July 31, 2008
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Perfect
wow..very peacefull..you make the reader wanting to be in the scene u described a place where only nature is surrounding !! liked it ALOT!! nicely done..bbest nature poems i've read ..being sincere


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justj4
June 03, 2008
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yeah
its good to see somone writting a nature piece, i really enjoyed it , without a hundred cuts, can you believe it, i know what your thinking its not possible but im telling ya i have achieved non self destructive appreciation, yowza


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lucky
June 02, 2008
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Excellent
Your poem leaves the reader at peace. It is so calming to read. You have excellent syle, imagery and very creative. The love of nature can be felt in your poetry.

Take care
Lucky



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