A Poem by jakenya_2


Author: jakenya_2
Created: September 17, 2008 at 09:49 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Romance
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 192 views

Us Against the World  

Ja'kenya and Kenyana one of a kind. For one reason or another them haters keep lying. Trying to break us, so she won't be mine. Only because my girl so fyne. But it'll be different if she wasn't mine, cause all them girls would be on their grind. Not only because your boy so fyne, but mainly to say your boy is Mine! This is how it is in this little city, everybody in it trying to take whatever they see. Trying to be evil, if only they could see. If they put forth the effort this is where they could be. In love with your mate, with no place to escape, cause haters are around saying bogus lies as bait. Hoping you or her will act instead of wait and mess up something that is oh so great.

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onesugar
September 18, 2008
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So true
People always want what they can't have or isn't theres to have, and that include relationships. I think a couple who can rise above that..will fare well.


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anna_marques
September 17, 2008
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wew.....
DAMN!!!!!
i cant believe this..
your words..
sorry..i don't know what to say..
i cant epxlain..its like
WOW..keep this up kid..ur born to do this..


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