A Poem by agreatpoetj06

Author: agreatpoetj06
Created: October 20, 2008 at 02:04 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Heartbreak | Free Verse | Despair
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 277 views


You played me,
You made it seem like it was real,
All this time you were taking advantages of me.
I gave you everything you ask for
Jewelry, money, comfort, love & appreciation.

What could you want more?
I made you my everything,
My friend, my girl, my wife, my life.
I tried my best to fulfill you desires,
But at the end you broke my heart.

Now look at you,
Looking for someone to love,
Looking for someone
Who gives a danm about you,
And now youíre wanting meeeee back?

Guess what?
My time has ended,
My time is been up,
Youíre done playing me
And now Iím gone for good!

Isnít karma a b*tch?

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

May 26, 2009
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LOL, isnt it funny how Karma comes back to bite hard in the ass.
Good for you.... Keep up the wonderful writing.
It takes courage to remove yourself from something that held you so tightly in its grasp.
Hats off to you friend.

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December 15, 2008
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Yes karma is def. a bitch. What goes around ALWAYS comes back around. Great expression and emotion. Well said, great job!

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