A Novel by KayWurdz


Author: KayWurdz
Created: June 20, 2009 at 01:27 am
Upload Type: Novel, T (13+)  
Category: Sad | Suspense | Dark
Upload Stats: 4.7 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments and 206 views

My Life Was Taken >>Chapter 3<<  

>>Chapter 3<<
I must have feel asleep crying, because I woke up to the sound of Marvin Gaye's music playing coming from downstairs. I quietly crept downstairs so my mom wouldn't hear me, but when I got to the last step it screeched.

I caught my mom twirling around as though she was dancing with someone. "Uhh Hmm!" I cleared my throat. "Oh h-hi hunnie!" She staggered. I asked her what she was doing and she informed me that she went on a date after work and that explained why she was up so late. "Date?" I yelled. "You can't get over daddy that quick!" "Young lady watch your tongue, before I knock it out! What do you know about relationships anyways?" she asked in an angry voice. I replied "ENOUGH!", and ran up the stairs so angry, because my life was becoming a complete nightmare.

I went into my room and closed the door behind me.

I always use to write when I didn't have anyone to talk to. This is what I wrote:

Mom
Mom loved
Mom loved dad
dad
dad loved
dad loved mom
dad isn't here
mom isn't there
mom and dad
just doesn't seem to care
so why should I
so why should I cry
I shouldn't
so I'll just say goodbye...

I didn't know where this poem came from. I guess I was just angry. I kept thinking longer and harder about the situation and it made me madder and madder:

I hate you
I hate me
I hate us
what is left for me
you did what you wanted
you didn't ask me
just because I'm 10
doesn't mean I shouldn't be happy!

I stuffed my two poems into my desk with the other thousands, well not thousands, but close. Writing seemed to become my new comfort although I was still a little fired up.

I clenched my fists and took a dive right into my bed. Even though I knew my dad wouldn't come back, I was not ready for mom to let another man into the house.

Little did I know he would be "in the house"...

Pouting to myself I questioned, "Why is the happening to me?" I rolled over and turned on the TV, which didn't stay on long at all. As I was flipping through the channels all I would see was movies or shows that were talking about relationships.

"UGGHH, what a day!" I complained and feel off to a sleep.

Kayla Shenese Mckoy copyright 2009



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meg008
June 23, 2009
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good one!


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emerald
June 23, 2009
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on to chapter 4
you have a eal talent for writing and also one for getting people addicted to your writing.......but that just means your doing wonderful and i cant wait to read the rest...


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kntinaz
June 22, 2009
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good
ok you got me now I can't leave it alone, hope your keyboard is working, if not should have a pen lol.......i'm liking it...Tony


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Daisuke
June 21, 2009
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Really Nice!
The one thing I have to say is, the ending of the second part "roadrunner" should be changed to: I feel the world turning up and down inside my head. Because that is how the character should feel at a time like that. Roadrunner is not really serious.
But I love your writing! And that is what is cool about you! Keep it up!

Regards,
Daisuke


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classic13
June 20, 2009
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nice chapter pretty short, but hey beggars can't be choosers. By the way really good chapter and Luther Vandros? Helps spark up any person i really want to see what happen nexts so I agree with the Priestess. Hurry hurry, chop, chop lol Can't wait for the next chapter keep it up.


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ThePriestess
June 20, 2009
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Next Chapter Please
Ok Kay, I honestly hope that you are working on creating the next chapter at this very minute. LOL, I am just kidding (well kind of not)
I am hooked and I want more NOW!!!!!
I can relate so very well to your writing - this one in particular. My parents divorced when I was 7, and then my mother started going through men like underwear - LOL.
I know exactly where your thoughts are coming from and you are not alone.

Sorry to be pushy, but dammit, where is the next chapter, LOL
Your friend, Timmie


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