A Poem by NoLeafClover1501


Author: NoLeafClover1501
Created: November 28, 2009 at 08:16 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Dark | Sad | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 281 views

Criss Cross  

Come away with me to find a new day.
We'll laugh and hold hands forget about the past.
You haunt my dreams I cannot escape your grasp.
My anguish doesn't matter,
you are long gone while I bask in misery.
Criss cross you rip me apart.
Self reflection, degredation I want
these scars to heal.
I need to feel, but I pop another pill hoping
I forget your face.
Criss cross you rip me apart.
I'm dead on the inside the fire has died,
I'm left crawling like a beast.
Rock bottom is my only friend
laughing at my need.
Laughing at my desire.
Criss cross you rip me apart.
I am worthless to you,
trapped in the prison of my mind.
Never healing,
never feeling.
I cannot escape this anger.
Like the stray it stays, waits
to unleash itself.
Criss cross you rip me apart.
Leaving me half the woman I once was.
Criss cross these scars never heal.


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Author Notes


New poem, let me know what you really think of it.


 
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Comments & Reviews



Erato
January 15, 2010
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I think it's pretty good
It flows well, and the descriptions and emotions really connect on a personal level. I could definitely relate to this, which really gives it a plus. Nice job.


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daughterofagoth
November 30, 2009
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I really liked it, it was beautifully written and well formatted.


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