A Poem by elfqueena


Author: elfqueena
Created: January 14, 2010 at 10:47 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Personal | Friendship
Upload Stats: 4.3 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments and 249 views

Truth Will Set You Free  



People want to
hear the truth
this they always
say.
But if the truth comes out
they're way
it is not
the real
truth that
they want.
They want it butter
coated.
They want
it silver slick,
Never tell them
what they
want.
As truth
will set you
free ,of them .
No matter if it hurts,
keep the truth
unto yourself.
So much happier
you will be,
Cause truth
will chase
friends away,
While truth will
set you
Free!


© elfqueena - all rights reserved

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kimuri
January 14, 2010
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so right



(Author)
thank you so much for reading my poemSharon

 elfqueena replied on January 14, 2010




wazziebear
January 14, 2010
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well said
good job keep it up



(Author)
thank you babe.sharon

 elfqueena replied on January 14, 2010




angelshorizon
January 14, 2010
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well said...



(Author)
Thank you so much,Sharon

 elfqueena replied on January 14, 2010




basketball
January 14, 2010
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This is a true and well-written poem. Excellent!!! i agree with you. But anyway, keep on the good work.



(Author)
thank you so much for your kind words of my poem Sharon

 elfqueena replied on January 14, 2010




cryer_baby
January 14, 2010
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so true



(Author)
thank you for reading my poem , I really appreciate it.Sharon

 elfqueena replied on January 14, 2010




carmurr
January 14, 2010
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Good write
I thought what you said was probably accurate, but sometime truth is the best way. If you want a critical review, you must want the truth, so here goes. You need more punctuation in your poem. I also think you could connect some of your lines and make more sense out of it and the flow would be better. But all in all, it was a good poem and I thought it had a very true message, but as you say, the truth does set you free. Jesus says that. carmurr



(Author)
Thank you carmurr, I appreciate you honesty in my poems and your help . glad you liked it Sharon

 elfqueena replied on January 14, 2010




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