A Music by Connor


Author: Connor
Created: January 23, 2010 at 03:18 am
Upload Type: Music, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 2.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 175 views

Tears Of The Rain  

The things she can never let go the past haunts her so
The pain is always the same and she plays the same old games
Doesn’t want to play any more
She just wants to settle the score
Take her broken heart and give it life again
Live the life she had before

Say is that rain or is that tears
She surrounds her self with her own fears
She feels her angels have left her so
She blocks every one away from her soul

She invites the misery
Soiling her body to erase the memories
Why oh why don’t they leave just leave she pleads
Pushing the good away from her
She feels she doesn’t deserve
Breaking the things she wants till she is left with nothing
And nothing is all she has

Say is that rain or is that tears
She surrounds her self with her own fears
She feels her angels have left her so
She blocks every one away from her soul

And now she is a slave to her own pain
She hurts time and time again
She just wants to reach the end of the line
Closes her and tells her self she’s fine


© Connor - all rights reserved


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SoulfulWoman
January 25, 2010
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The concept of this write come through but I think you should review and just tweek is a little to make it more dynamic.
The emotion is there.


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