A Poem by elfqueena

Author: elfqueena
Created: February 10, 2010 at 08:28 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 210 views

i hate going to the store  

I hate going to the store
it's a real bore.
I get so mad at the prices,
every things higher even the ice is.
I go to buy the meat,
man I may never eat
again if I can't have my beef.
And looking at the produce
is making me want to reduce,
The can goods they're all higher,
beware ,you unsuspecting buyers.
An cheese's we love so much
laugh out loud , can't touch .
Poor ole souls ,use to buy can mutt food
now its so high, they just have to make do.
And the government says the cost of living
hasn't risen, HA, well let them try to go
and see if they can survive, oh what
old people are given.

© elfqueena - all rights reserved

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February 11, 2010
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i see your point. the poem has a good message and theme but the flow is kinda bumpy. all in all its still very good though

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