A Poem by elfqueena


Author: elfqueena
Created: March 22, 2010 at 12:01 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Educational | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 236 views

WINTER'S TREAT  

The winds have all but died down , and it so cold here in this town
snow is all over as the cold have dumped they're white laundry all over.

But that's okay as i will go outside and gather up that white delight and
we will have snow ice cream tonight.

Oh such a treat mmm with vanilla of chocolate to flavor
ah such a treat all my kids savored.

Real ice cream doesn't compare to this wintrier treat
but you have to go outside to get it and freeze you delicate feet.

Oh but its worth all the risk, to get a tub of this just make sure of
all the ingredients to fix this heavenly dish that melts so fast, I always do !

Just take a tub of snow and hurry don't be slow as melt fast it really will
have all ready to mix as the faster you make it the better it will be.

Now in a bowl you mix all at once two eggs ( don't worry the cold freezes them)
1cup of your sugar and a can of real cream a dash of salt for the taste .

Beat it all real well,add you flavoring , vanilla,chocolate if you please
them mix it into the snowy dream then you will have your wintrier treat.

OOH so good it will just melt in your mouth and send shivers up your spine
then put it all in a bowl to keep for a day in the freezer, nobody dare touch it
you say cause its mine.


P.S THIS IS A VERY IMPORTANT NOTE TO MAKE PLEASE,

OH PLEASE MAKE SURE THE SNOW ISN'T YELLOW YOU SEE

IT WILL MORE THEN LIKELY BE WHERE THE DOG PEED

AND I DON'T THINK YOU WOULD WANT THAT KIND OF TREAT !





Last Modified: March 22, 2010 at 02:27 am
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Author Notes


here's what we do on a snowy winters day

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Calrootpeg
March 22, 2010
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Cute. We just got three feet of the white stuff. First day of Spring. Truck stuck in my driveway, no way in, or out. The dish fills fast, the signal won't last, the TV is off, e-gads.
Just 65 a day ago, fruit trees are budding, a trip to the cat-fish hole, now just snow.
That white stuff you enjoy.
It sounds so sweet, this icy snow treat, sugar and spice, but anything but nice- see, the truck needs digging out, the Juniper is laid out flat, my peach buds may survive, but the damage is yet to be surmised, yes your treat is divine, though much tastier at Christmas time! (line 9, the you, goes nowhere) Cute poem.



(Author)
thank you so much your writ was cute lol i anm glad you liked this thanksSharon

 elfqueena replied on March 22, 2010




andycapped
March 22, 2010
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DID YOU EVER TRY THAT THERE YELLOW SNOW ??/ LOLLOL!! MAYBE IF I WAS OUT IN A COUNRTY SETTING. BUT, I LIVE IN A CITY , OIL REFINERY ONE MILE AWAY. LAND FILL FIVE MILES AWAY. DOWNTOWN TWO MILES AWAY. YOU CAN PROBLEY GROW A THIRD ARM IF YOU ATE OR SNOW . LOLLOL!!! SHIT,IT MIGHT BE SAVER TO EAT THE YELLOW SNOW. LOLLOL!!11 GOOD POEM THOUGH A*C*



(Author)
lol that would be a problem out there , no no yellow snow lol,yuck !
well i would send you some but might melt before it got there lol thanks babe xoxo Sharon

 elfqueena replied on March 22, 2010




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